http://awritinglilypea.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] awritinglilypea.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] notaballad 2009-05-30 11:49 pm (UTC)

Gabriel snickered at that and turned slightly, glancing over his shoulder at his lover. “A bit?” he teased. He laughed and shivered when Desmond bit at his neck, and then he shifted, settling back against Desmond. “Nah, I think I can handle it. I love you more than having the bed all to myself.”

This right here is freaking hot!

The way you write is so vivid and wonderful.

I love it.
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